That's the name of a screenplay, by yours truly. I just finished the second real draft [after the first round of mentor comments] after having a stack of marked-up copies sitting to my right for months. Anyway, I'm pleased with the level of improvement. I've definitely worked up the dialogue in the last act way better, and so I'll probably print it out and send back to J&M and ask them to put their Actor/Director/TeacherHats back on and give me more feedback.
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Friday, March 22, 2002
That's the name of a screenplay, by yours truly. I just finished the second real draft [after the first round of mentor comments] after having a stack of marked-up copies sitting to my right for months. Anyway, I'm pleased with the level of improvement. I've definitely worked up the dialogue in the last act way better, and so I'll probably print it out and send back to J&M and ask them to put their Actor/Director/TeacherHats back on and give me more feedback.
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